hey sixers! welcome back. i really appreciate you coming to visit each week :)
today i'm sharing a little snippet from my new wip, Lawn Mowers. yeah, i know. weird title, but it is what it is :D
this story has just been pouring itself onto the screen, and i have to say that the characters have really surprised me with their intensity so far.
this is a little glimpse into the mind of Markus, the bad boy of the bunch.
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Markus hooked a thumb into the waist of his jeans, pulling them down just a little
further and making sure that his biceps flexed under the sheen of sun-screen
and sweat. That particular move had brought more than one woman to her knees
for a little afternoon-delight.
Apparently made of sterner stuff, Faye's expression
remained impassive.
Man, he loved a challenge.
Smile widening, he began a
variation of the same question he’d tossed her way twice a week for the past
month. “You look bored, Ms. Rogers.”
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check out my fellow sixers at Six Sentence Sunday. there are so many talented writers out there! i only have time to read through about 1/3 or maybe 1/2 each week, so my apologies to those who drop by and comment if i don't get the opportunity to return the favor!
lol...okay, I like Markus...he seems fun! Great six :)
ReplyDeleteMarkus doesn't know what he's getting into, I'm sure! Or is it the other way round? :D
ReplyDeleteHe may not have gotten Faye's attention, but he has mine! ;)
ReplyDeleteSo funny! Made me laugh aloud, espec the line of her being made of sterner stuff. Visuals were very clear; could almost feel his body. ;-) I'm definitely NOT made of sterner stuff.
ReplyDeletemarkus is definitely fun, if not a little intense at times :D good thing he's cute, because he's bad!
ReplyDeleteI made a great decision to stop by this Sunday. I love the dynamic of Faye and Markus. She's not easy and he's not a quitter. I can't wait for next week!
ReplyDeleteOoooh...another bad boy snippet! I like!
ReplyDeleteI can totally see that pose, that flirt. Oh, yum, Mr. Markus!
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